Entries from October 2009 ↓

I first discovered my tendency to worry too much about what other people thought about my writing when I wrote fiction. I was so hung up fretting about what people would think if I wrote a certain way or about a certain subject, I was beginning to stifle my own creativity. It wasn’t until I learned to let go of these hang-ups did my writing abiltiy improve.

A copywriter can go through a similar process. When writing for a client they often get too hung up about how the client will want something written.

I’m not saying that you should go against your brief and write exactly what you want, but you have to remember that you are actually writing for your reader. They are the ones that have to react to your carefully crafted words.

Today when I work with clients, I will always follow their brief but write in a way I know will attract customers. If challenged I will stand up for my writing and explain precisely why it was written that way.

Normally that does the trick and illustrates that I do actually know what I am talking about.

What if your client doesn’t listen and insists in it being written their way?

Simple, you have 2 choices – either walk away or comply but make sure you send them an email or letter outlining why you wrote your initial draft the way you did and that you explained your reasons to them. That way if they come back to you unhappy because the particular piece of sales copy didn’t work you can turn round to them and in the nicest possible way say “I told you so.”

Writers can be very insecure creatures but to create excellent copy you have to write from the heart – forget about wanting to be liked and wanting security – you know what works, so write it!

This particular problem is explained in a great blog by Craig Wildenradt on Copyblogger entitled: “How Your Emotions Are Strangling the Life Out of Your Copy“.

Guess what?

FreelanceCopywritersBlog has done it again.

It has been listed by ReliableWriters as one of the best 73 resources for online freelance writers as an “Excellent blog with tips to make you a better writer. Topics generally focused on copywriting/sales writing but sometimes you’ll find general writing tips, too.”

Thank you so much to everyone at ReliableWriters, it means a lot to have my writing recognised in this way.

If you think about it, just about everything can be sold – products, services, information, the possibilities are endless. Therefore you would assume that the range of different types of copy must be staggering.

But if you look a bit deeper you’ll realised that essentially there are 3 types of copy that fulfil just about every possible use:

• Copy that sells to your reader
• Copy that attracts customers
• Copy that builds relationships and gets to know them

Of course, copy isn’t necessarily just there to fulfil one of the above requirements, it could (and usually does) exist to perform a combination of them.

Copy that sells

You would think all copy sells, but as this blog will explain that isn’t always necessarily the case. The main formats that require copy crafted to sell are:

• Direct mail
• Direct email
• Advertisements that contain a direct response option (i.e. “Order now and your kettle for 5 easy payments of £10)
• Ecommerce websites – i.e. those with ordering capabilities so the buying decisions can me made there and then and acted upon.

All of these are designed to get an immediate sale. They are designed to get people to make a snap decision so you’ll find that frequently they contain a limited offer of sorts – limited by time, the number available or price (whereby a special offer is only available until a certain date).

Copy that attracts customers

In this case your copy should be designed to generate a different reaction. Here you don’t need to make a sale immediately. Instead your writing should lay the first foundation stone towards making the sale.

You see, you won’t always have the option to make a sale immediately. Think about the types of sales copy you have seen. Much of it exists to raise awareness to a website, shop or something along those lines. Therefore your copy should arouse interest sufficiently to make your reader want to learn more about your product or service. It will direct them to a website or shop.

So where will you see this type of copy used?

• Print advertising
• TV or radio advertisements
• Email – newsletters, ezines, email offers

Copy that builds relationships and gets to know your reader

You could easily argue that sales are all about relationship building because, ideally, you want your customer to return to you again and again.

But there are certain products and services that will require a certain amount of customer wooing before they will commit to buy. These could be expensive services, long term services or products that will require the approval of several decision makers before a sale can be made.

Copy here obviously has to be there for the long haul. This isn’t a sprint to a sale; this method is more like running a marathon. You’ve got to build credibility and educate your readers as to why your product or service is for them.

Therefore much of what you write here is going to be informative than a hard sell. You have to pick away at them building the image of your product or service in their minds until they come to the right decision – i.e. that they want to buy it.

So what formats does this type of selling take?

• Press releases
• Articles (print or online)
• Brochures
• Leaflets
• White papers

Now are you beginning to see how versatile the world of the freelance copywriter is?

Sales copy isn’t just about making a sale. Many people don’t like to think they are being sold something – I know I don’t. If someone goes in for the hard sell I will just switch off. However if someone can prove to me that their product or service will benefit my life in some way, I am more likely to listen.

So, next time you sit down to write some sales copy think about what you are trying to achieve with it.

Meet Dave,

He’s a Suffolk wedding photographer.

Photography is his passion; he’s a natural with people but he has one fatal flaw. Something so dangerous it could potentially destroy his business. Something so terrifying it often keeps him awake at night because he knows that one day it could mean the end of his photography business.

Oh my God! What on earth could it be?

It is something so dastardly it affects numerous small businesses every day – not just wedding photographers. It could even effect you!

Tell me!

The thing that keeps Dave awake at night is his roller-coaster marketing.

Every small business experiences it to some degree. You see Dave has had a busy summer – every weekend he was doing wedding photography. In fact he was so busy he’d taken his eye of his marketing. He had no systems in place to contact past customers and he didn’t provide a newsletter. But Dave wasn’t worried – he had a full diary this year.

But then Dave looked towards next year. Oh dear.

Normally by now Dave would have 30 or more weddings already booked – so far he had 10. The wedding fair season was fast approaching but that wasn’t going to generate enough leads. He had a website – a real flashy little number full of photos and graphics.

“But it looks great” said Dave

“It does,” I agreed, “but Google doesn’t look at pictures.”

There lies the problem. His website looked very pretty but no one could find it. He had two choices – pay for an expensive pay per click campaign or do some serious work on his website to get Google to notice him.

Content is the key. Even if you work within a very visual industry (such as wedding photography) you still need great quality, keyword rich website copywriting on your website.

You see, you have to remember who is going to be looking at your website. It is your readers that you have to draw in. Yes, they will want to see your photographs, but they also want to know what you are going to do for them – what sets you apart from all the other wedding photograhers?

The only way they’ll discover that is through your words. Talk to them, don’t just tell them how wonderful you are. Put their needs first – if you were looking for a wedding photographer what would you want to know?

Adjectives and adverbs – they have their place but not in your sales copy.

When writing to sell, be to the point, clear and precise. Littering your copy with qualifiers detracts from your message. They will turn an excellent piece of copy into a lame, unexplosive whimper.

To make an impact your copy should be littered with high impact verbs – powerful language that will make your reader sit up and take notice. This isn’t always easy to attain and may take several drafts before you are anywhere near close.

Ali Hale has written a great post about these vampire words sucking the life out of your writing on Copyblogger. If you want your writing to stand out and be noticed grab that garlic and stake and banish the little critters from your headlines and body text.